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Written by Paul
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Monday, 16 July 2012 08:04 |
 I had fun constructing this chapter, everything just kind of fell into place. I needed a beat between Max's adventure getting off the ground, so to speak, and the massive fuckfest she is about to engage in. Plus, I needed to show what Russ was doing to keep him involved. Also, I wanted to get Chris in there and start getting her really into what is going on, so once I twigged to the idea of an all-voyeur chapter, things clicked and I knew Tash was who I needed. Even in a porn narrative, you need a real slut to move the plot along sometimes. Note I don't say that disparagingly - I love slutty characters, as I must.
The idea of Russ being a real voyeur has been alluded to more than once, and I found the idea of interrupting him to be hilarious. We all feel foolish if we get caught fapping, no matter who we are. There you are, pants open, porn on the screen, unable to pretend you are doing anything but what you are doing. It's one of those universal moments. Plus, here I could really lean on the idea that Chris really kind of digs her dad in a non-daughter kind of way. It isn't helping that she has learned all these new things about him, and is seeing him in a different light - almost as a different person. A different person she finds irresistibly hot. Thus do things get even more complicated as we pile on plot-related points. But fear not - on Wednesday we will get Max creating a boom.
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